Hmm? Firstly, you will notice that I did not permit your article to be published in the way you sent it. You sent it as a NEW ARTICLE - I shifted it to this position and put this page in your 'favourites' section. Next time, click on the favourite section, and you will come directly here to this article site.
Next, we need to correct your composition. See me later - NO CHARGE!
New Photos and Articles? I have been very busy since I came back to town and have not had a chance to finish my story about the winter holiday. Maybe when I finish the Teaching Manual I will have time. (But I think you just want me to put that new photo of you in here! Yes?) But yes - some photos of the new buildings being built and ones of the old buildings being pulled down might prove interesting.
Your Writing: To improve your writing, perhaps in addition to reading, you should commence WRITING out some of the stories that you read, and perhaps you will become more familiar with English Grammar.
Don't forget to talk to me about correcting your errors here. OK?
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